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for a 12 year old how good is this story Chapter 1? April Cheer up, Its graduation, After tonight we don? t Have To Spend Another minute in this place!? Dara said. ? Ino I guess I didn t really think of it like that? I Replied effortlessly As I was on the graduation committee team I Have Had No time to my self-organizing Lately with the decorations and the tea and coffee for afters I Have HAD only little time to get a dress for Alison? S graduation party. If It Had Been Someone Else? S party I wouldn t be going sincere goal is my best friend Alison I Have No choice really. Mr. Devlin-our principle – shouted from the background? get in line, alphabetically, class class bye Quickly We Have no time to waist!? getting in line was easy Since my name is April 2nd Conlon II was in line 2 (Alice and Aimee are in behind.) As Mr. Devlin Walked out to the first podium ET Called Where everyone? s name out alphabetically. Since im a real Cluts I Was Focussed on more walking out to the course all eyes staring Rather That at me? April Conlon? Mr Devlin shouted down the microphone. I felt a sense of pleasure When He handed me my diploma. I Walked to join the rest of my class. After Mr. Devlin? S speech everyone Threw Their hats up in the air. I Walked over to my mum and dad and of course II was greeted with tears and hugs. Alison Walked Towards me and again I Was greeted with a smile and a hug. Alison Gave me a small rectangular shaped box wrapped in paper decorated with sliver smooth a pink bow. ? Alison you shouldn t off? II was cut mid sentence by Alison inn? I intended no i did so just open it I want to know what you think!? Turned mum and dad HAD to talk to Alison? s mum and dad. Slowly I ease Opened Without the present rectangular Trying not to rip the wrapping paper? Hello we haven t got all day here You Have to help me set up for the party remember! ? Alison Said with great hurriedness. I open the lid of the box to find the Most Beautiful silver charm bracelet I Had ever seen. It Had one charm on it in the shape of a diploma. I Began to cry? April don? T cry you? Ll make you run make-up? Alison Suggested SoundEdit like it and She Was about to cry too. ? Alison I love it, and beautiful it 10 times better That the gift I got you! ? Said I with my eyes still full of tears. I whipped a small black box out of my pocket and she Gave it to open it and Alison in a locket It Was with the words inscribed on the Best Friends front of it, read the inside makes best friends – best friends are forever remember all the DID THEY Things together all the Mistakes They Made and THEY HAD all the fun I Will Always remember our friendship and cherish it as one of the best I Have ever known. ? STI?. Its beautiful I love it? She Said whipping the tears Away From Her eyes? help me put it on April please? Asked Alison. I undid the latch back while Alison Held Her Hair. I let go my wrist and then clipped onto my wrist. Our mums and dads Quickly Turned to us we hugged. ? Ill see you in Two Hours? Said Alison happily as Her, mum and dad here Walked out the doors to Their car. We Followed heading to our light blue Volvo parked near the front of the school Mr. Devlin WAS Their Farewells to say history? as we headed out the door. Mum drove while dad Went on about Where We Were going to go for Something to eat my and my brother Tyler (as usual dressed in historical skinny jeans white top and blue cardigan) sat quietly in the back. We ended up eating in Gnosh. I couldn t eat fast Enough of I just wanted to go home and get my blue dress off graduation. Earlier I wasn t really looking forward to Alison? Party s purpose I am now. When We Pulled Into the driveway of our house I literally raced up the stairs to put on my new dress. My boob-chub white satin dress just about Passed my knee. I Had diamante design on the hand and the bottom bodes hand flowed out. Where my shoes open toed heights with white diamonds on the strap That crossed my foot and laced around my ankles THEY forming a bow. WAS my hair down in a side shade with a slide in the side. My phone row and I Knew That It Was Alison. I Answered the phone and I Knew from the Automatically Alison in frustration? Something That s voice wasn t right. ? April IS Their Any chance you come a little early Could my little runt of a brother bust all the balloons!? she shouted down the phone? ill get my dad to drop me down now? I Replied. I Walked down the stairs Careful not to fall in my new shoes to get my dad to drop me down to Alison House. Theys journey was quiet all purpose my dad singing. I fiddled with my charm bracelet and a bit After 20 minutes We arrived at Alison? S house. The trees in the garden Where decorated with fairy lights and the garden Looked spectacular. I kissed my dad and Walked Towards the front door. Alison open it with a look of relief on Her Face. Her dress was stunning. It Was a black drop