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(This is the latest extract from my book, i have a FEW posts on here. This Is An extract from my first draft so please excuse me if There Are spelling, grammar, punctuation and run-on sentences) I head over and look over the balcony looking down at everybody just going crazy. Looking around the first person That Catch My Eye IS Hannah dancing With Her New Guy. I aussi Lexi spot with Terry. Lisa and Sarah are dancing too close by, I find myself getting order drawn back to Both Hannah and Lexi. I don t want to though. Standing here looking at ‘em Both Alone Down There Having a great time, I realized I am not really HAVING A Time As Good as I Thought I Was. Out of nowhere a Midwestern accent says? Girl problems!? Slowly I raise my head to look at Her, Her FOLLOWING slim smooth long legs up to Her elegant slender body, my eyes finally arrives at Her Face. Her chin and cheek bones definitive really stand out are intended Perfectly placed. I say? Plural? Looking at me she Raises Her eye brow, I tell her? Girls – not girl? Edging Closer to me, I notice Her Mouth is really big, Her When She Smiles ear to ear smile IS. She tells me? Looks like we are in the Same boat then? In Her disinterested I reply? What You Got Problems girl too?? No – boy problems? I am really not interested in. this skinny sexy girl I tell her? Look, I Appreciate, whatever This is, I order? m not looking for anything tonight – so if you? re a sweet girl, or a psycho nut job or if you think We Have a unspoken connection forget it – ive been there got the T- shirt and I am not Interested? Her dark green eyes, Which are complemented with black mascara have-nots left my face, wile I am just looking over the balcony. ? Wow!? Proclaim and she was not in Good Wayi carry on telling her? So what ever ideas you have, just save yourself and go get Some Time Another guy, sorry not going to order your bag me tonight sweetheart? That? s ok ive already? Before you bagged? This time I do look up at Her. She Asks? You Don t do you remember me?? Should I – do we know Each Other?? Better than you know? What you Some Kind of stalker, ive not HAD one of ‘em yet? ? The First Time We Met You Were Being obnoxious asshole year – just like now? I Look At Her with a blank face, she Carries On? It Was A Few days before You Had That fight at the soccer game? Sweetheart, I Was in a pretty dark place then, I don t remember anything from That Specific Period of Time? You Walked up to me and the guy That Was talking to me, and Asked Me If I Want To Spend the rest of the night With That loser, or to Have Sex with you? Taking more interest in the conversation I ask? We Have Sex?? Yes – Then You Left Without Even Wanting to know my name, made me feel this big? Yeah sorry I haven t got a clue? Well I really rocked your world then? Sorry, That purpose Period of time is just a blank? I Had Sex With You That Night Because I Was looking for the same thing, and Seen as though we are in a similar situation, You Need cheering up, so just how we end Have a laugh, no sex or anything just have some fun!? What you got in mind?? Nothing, just Have a laugh, keep our minds off the Occupied we really want people to think about, we are just Helping Each Other. Neither of us want to start the year like this we do? I shake my head, she notices THROUGHOUT this conversation I keep looking down at Hannah and Lexi. Asks me she? So Which ones are they?? I point out to Her Them Both, she looks at me? Well looks like some fun HAVING They Are, Maybe You Should try it too – common I? ll buy you a drink? I Her show the champagne bottle, she shakes Her head? No I mean a proper drink, drank That You Can Bring Along too? Taking one last look at Hannah and Lexi I walk over to the bar with this girl. Sitting on the bar I Let Her Know I get drinks for free. We line up A Few whiskey chasers. Drinking whiskey the first shot she Introduces herself to me, Her name is Jodie. I drink my shot, we down the bottles of beer together, Both of us are laughing Already. The next chaser Comes and goes. We end up HAVING 8 or 9 this girl Can I drink? M impressed. she jokes I Should Defend Her Against my belt, I laugh back That She Is the second girl to challenge me this year. I joke MOST girls want sex with me not out drink me, she laughs She Has Already Had Sex with me. Having A Few more drinks she grabs my hand and Takes the champagne bottle and leads me down the stairs onto the dance floor. She purposely Makes sure we dance Between Both Hannah and Lexi and Makes sure the Both of Them Can See us dancing. We dance for a wile, She Has done a fantastic job of Taking off my mind Both of Them by Having a laugh and having fun. Who knew!. We are Having a great time together, we are really Being load and childish, just messing about. Both Hannah and Lexi keep looking over at me Every so Ofte